My June Ad

So here's my ad. Keep in mind this is only a 1/6 page, 6+ inches by 2+ inches. I think since it's colorful, people will be drawn to it....at least hopefully. The theme for the issue is "VIPs in the Valley." So I figured that I should concentrate on portraiture. This is a relatively new design as well. So I'm still figiting with it. I'll begin to do more edits the more I advertise. I'd love your feedback. Thanks!